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Jorge's avatar

This was an amazing read. I would buy your book

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M.E.T's avatar

did you really just hit us with a 1240 word single sentence that's (on first look) grammatically correct? OK Faulkner -- let's put down that thick, meaty pen of yours.

You've written 11k words, basically a fifth an whole novel, and now I have to read this. Why? Because you have exposed me (once again).

Reading you always makes me embarrassed. I have no idea who you are or why your writing feels so real, but come on -- "Anthropological curiosity" -- this is too much. I'm just very interested in people -- but now I feel like an alien, trying to figure humanity out through voyeuristic observation lmaoo.

So what I'm trying to say is, if you release a book, I'd read it.

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Mxtyplk's avatar

Fucking brilliant. Even just the opening tour of American class signifiers. I imagine it’s disturbing to be as gifted as you are and have no place to put it besides obscure corners of the internet. Sorry.

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Obsidian Blackbird.'s avatar

I read that whole thing up on my farm in the wilds of New Zealand - where I am now.

I have an Egyptian Copt friend back in Florida that goes on about his dad a lot ( who was also in medicine )

Im sending you the light.

Im kind of thinking you smoked a 7 gram rock before writing that…

I hope you find love and happiness…

But also keep writing like this…

You are awesome.

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Lavendermilk14's avatar

couldn't put this down, really good

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Carla Berenice's avatar

You’re just pure talent

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Martin's avatar

I started reading this and I couldn’t stop so I read it all until the end and now I’m here.

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Tom Kudla's avatar

Really, really good. --and i'm only into the top fifth of the 3rd paragraph. this will be my Saturday morning read!

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Kristoffer O’Shaugnessy's avatar

This is a great story. It is beautifully and compellingly written. I read it in its entirety and even though some of it went against my sensibilities it persuaded me to take out a paid subscription in the near future.

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chloé happe's avatar

Epic banger

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Pedro L. Gonzalez's avatar

Happy to see your anti e girl turn

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Bimbo Ubermensch's avatar

Howdy Pedro

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Thomas's avatar

Cornish Chicken for dinner tonight.

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William Richards's avatar

This kicked me in both my heart and my teeth. Top notch stuff.

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Michael Arturo's avatar

Bimbo Übermensch is Charles Bukowski and Nastsha Leonne’s abandoned love child.

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Dino Medici's avatar

“Three phones: one for business, one for the sacred, and one for the profane.”

I’m dying lmao

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St. Jerome Powell's avatar

Whoa

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